“From where I sit, I can still see your teaspoon stop mid-stir, thin wisps of steam rising from your mug – your Holy Grail – and then you’re gone. You never said so much as a goodbye or thanks. You just went ahead, choking on either the teaspoonful of cappuccino or the bitter words that came out of our mouths.” — The Caffeine Chronicles
THE FOLLOWING audio clip is my second collaboration with fabulous Christina Brownlee. Once more, thank you, Christina! Tempest in My Coffee Cup, like all my other works, was written from a masculine perspective. Having it in sound bites and in feminine POV has given the piece a fresh new meaning. The character that swarmed then settled deep inside my head long ago is now gone. In its place is someone who may not exactly share my thoughts, my particular fears, my place in the world. The mind no longer owns the words. But you know what, that is exactly why I like Christina’s reading so much.
The Caffeine Chronicles # 1
My Pretzel Logic
I think you’ve got a refreshing approach to the online presentation of poetry, with the voiceover reading and the entrancing visuals — looking forward to seeing more.
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i appreciate your taking time to read (listen, will be more appropriate) and drop a line about this post. in light of christina’s two wonderful interpretations so far, i have a sneaky feeling that this wouldn’t be the last.
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‘Leaving things the way they were’ – this really sung to me. (Love that green cup and saucer – very cool!!)
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it is cool. loved it too! thank you, gabriela!
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Hallo,
This is for your, for being kind for others and me, http://www.bigcards.nl/card/pickup/bc-c7cf3c10/
Sweet Valentine greetings, Summer
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so sweet of you, summer! thank you so much! a love-filled valentine’s day to you :)
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You’re welcome : ) And thanks to you too
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:D
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Fantastic! Utterly made my day has this!
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appreciate it!
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magnificiently done!!!
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thank you for stopping by and for the kind words!
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Reblogged this on TheWhyAboutThis and commented:
This is just a terrific audio. A collaboration with Christina Brownlee, reconstructingchristina.com and My Pretzel Logic! His poetry is amazing and when read by Christina it’s perfect. For those who love, a great cup of coffee surrounded by emotions of the angst of romance – but loved and lost. Listen (for those who know my story, yes I do have bragging rights on this one!) :)
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wonderful reblog, penny! you are awesome! thanks :)
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In this specific case, for ALL the reasons I just mentioned, my most sincere pleasure! :)
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: )
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Amazed, really am! By your beautiful poem, Neil and Christina’ s voice making it…more alive in her own, so touching way.
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thank you so much! :)
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Reblogged this on reconstructingchristina and commented:
I have had the highest honor, once again, to read aloud another piece of Neil’s…this from his Caffeine Chronicles. I am a caffeine/coffee addict and an addict of his words! Thank you Neil…for yet another divine collaboration! :D
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very kind words and generous reblog. thank you, thank you!
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Thank “you”!! :D
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:D
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I love words….I love your words Neil!! Thank you for allowing me the honor, again, to read them aloud. My gratitude is yours sweet sir! :D
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always a privilege, christina. i wish i could compile more into a CD one day :)
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Oooo….that would be so amazing!!! :D
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that is if we get to at least 8 tracks ;)
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Count me in….anytime you wish! :D I am addicted after all…. ;)
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:D
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Fantastic — well done to you both.
Great poetry, and riviting delivery
by the lovely Christina. x RL
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Appreciate it, Robyn! :-)
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Reblogged this on Alastair's Blog and commented:
A melodious voice telling a magnificent poem. Maybe I’ll see if I can persuade her to read some of mine :-)
Another brilliant collaboration
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…and appreciate the reblog!
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:-)
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I read this on your blog a few weeks ago. You have chosen the right person for this. She has a melodious voice that tells the poem perfectly. A fantastic poem and an incredible reading.
Thank you for sharing this with us all
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you’re right! her voice is perfect. thank you, alastair!
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You’re welcome.
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